Save me

by HomoMegan   Mar 18, 2008


I feel alone and i don't know why
I sit alone at night and cry
I'm tired of feeling angry, and sad
I cant talk to anyone, not even my own dad
I have cried so many tears
It's has been this way for years
For now i will let the world pass by me
Hoping that one day someone will save me

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  • 13 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    I like this..

    And to let yu know some day it will get betterrr... yu will be released for the pain and the sadness and yu won't be up crying soo much..and you will be able to talk to people...yu will begin to open up and let go

  • 13 years ago

    by iRobbiee

    I like this..

    And to let yu know some day it will get betterrr... yu will be released for the pain and the sadness and yu won't be up crying soo much..and you will be able to talk to people...yu will begin to open up and let go

  • 13 years ago

    by Love Panda

    I'm tired of feeling angry, and sad
    [lose the comma]

    I cant talk to anyone, not even my own dad
    [lose the own, will read smoother]

    It's has been this way for years
    [It has been this way for years!]

    [The last two lines i would change the 'ME' word completly]

    -It was an O.K read. Could of been better, i have read most of your work and this doesnt even compare. I know you can do better. -IBE

  • 16 years ago

    by slowlyxfallingxapart

    This is really good. I like it a lot!

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