Wow sometimes i feel that way

Well, my first suggestion is that your capitalize all of the I's. It makes a neater appearance.

i guess its to late to fix any of this
my heart feels to broken
i mean you ignore me now
in weeks we haven't spoken...
^^Both "to's" in the first and second line should be "too". The third is is really weird to read; I don' think you should put the "I mean".

I'm sorry I'm not the daughter you wanted
I'm sorry i didn't meet your expectations
I'm sorry that you didn't and still don't love me
I'm sorry that there where to many complications to
^^In the last line the first "to" need to be "too" and the second to I think you need to just leave out all together. What I did like about this stanza was the repetition if "I'm sorry" It really gets the point across.

So it's a very touching poem about your relationship with your mom. It seems like she just doesn't care and maybe doesn't want a relationship with you, and you're trying so very hard to have one. You love your mom and want to please her, but nothing you do seems to satisfy her. I know this feeling, and it's really hard to deal with, but you'll make it through. I know you will! :]

Great poem!

Keep writing!
Cayce

I really like how you said "Where did I go wrong?" I loved all the stanza's and they were all very meaningful and heartfelt. I can tell you really put a lot of effort into this poem and thank you for sharing this. Good Job! Take Care!

This is a great poem! I feel this way alot... this i great! Keep it up!

Hey this is really a great poem
I absolutely love it
And it do really includes me
keeping writing :)

The rhyme scheme was awesome and overall it's enjoyable read. Loved the third stanza very much. i don't know but I feel that's the most powerful one. 5/5

Writing is a great outlet for emotion. This piece is certainly very deep. Some people have a hard time expressing how they feel which is a shame for the person searching for love and the kind of attention they need. Heartfelt pice.

Very nice...!

Do not change a thing, this is truly from the heart.. i know exactly how u feel hun, rly i wrote similiar poems many times cause ideal wit hthis i feel the saem way about my mom she has depression she does the same thing and i totaly get it jsut keep praying i lvoe this poem 5/5

Your poem is so sad. But I can relate tyo the words you put within it. They are heartfelt and meaningful. Well done
I hope things get better for you. When you have kids make sure you treat them the way you wanted to be treated and it will come back to you in droves and all the past will fade away.

I know how your feeling I haven't talked to my mom for like 3 years now I try my best to make her happy. But nothing works.I'm so heart broken cuz I hear say I love you all my brother and sister..and I'm sitting like what about me.

I totally know what your talkin about, I feel the same way with my mum :-( good job...

This is amazing and very sad, if this is your situation, i'm sorry, it must be hard, i hope it changes/ has changed, wonderful poem 5/5

I'm sorry I'm not the daughter you wanted.
I'm sorry I didn't meet your expectations.
I'm sorry that you didn't and still don't love me.
I'm sorry that there were too many complications.

^^^Your words made me cry, Tabi.
God only gave me one child, a son. How I wished he had given me a daughter also!
I would have pampered her to death! To read how a mother can be this way with her child just makes me so sad:(
I hope that when you grow up, you will give your daughter the best childhood a girl could ever wish for:)

Hugs,

Ingrid 5/5