Comments : The Tree and I

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Oh! Very nice. It was definitly not what I expected, and it made me love the piece more!
    I loved how you portrayed then and now. It sucks when one event can change your life so dramatically.
    The idea, of growing up with a tree, was unique and very cute.:)

    This piece made me smile.
    Excellent job,
    5/5--Elly.

  • 16 years ago

    by Anthony Duvalle

    Beautifully worded

    and even though short, it told a story that lasted years

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really enjoyed this piece the message was well done and the whole idea of you growing up together was a novel Idea great work Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by khate

    Its magnificent,..i really love it

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    This poem has a decent analogy between the tree and your character. This poem is unique as it describes your thoughts and feelings as the tree's. By that you show how lonely you were, as the tree was and how you suffered with him together. A very unique idea 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amorita Maharaj

    Excellent Poem! I just loved it.... Very creative :)

  • 16 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    A unique poem,but with a depth-makes one ponder,how lonely life can be.keep writing.

  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This is a very unique poem that I enjoyed. The whole story is very interesting and you put such creativity in this poem. I liked how when you suffered, the tree suffered with you. Great work, keep writing, always and forever....