I just can't seem to find you.

by Unamed   Mar 20, 2008


This sorrow is too much for me to take.
I cannot let it build up inside me anymore.
It builds and builds, and it seems
like it will never go away.

I try to be strong and not cry.
months and months pass by,
my tears and grief build up inside of me
my soul can't keep it inside anymore.

Tears, too many tears are falling down my cheeks.
With every trace of every tear
my eyes swell and redden
My smile, it seems has left me.
A long long time ago.

The grief that your death has brought me
is too much to live with.
It is nothing. Only a heartache.

My life it seems has no more meaning.
It had all revolved around you.
The smile that you had brought onto my face
it seems, has left me.
A long long time ago.

Maybe that is why i pulled the trigger.
I couldn't take the pain anymore.
I just had to see you again.
But it was wrong to hope that I'd see you again.
Because...

I just can't seem to find you
in this dark, mysterious,
other world.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alex D

    Well written poem, your despair is evident from start to finish. I am empathetic to your situation and wish you the very best. Keep writing and bringing us lovely pieces to read!

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Very discriptive and emotional.
    it also projects the image to me.
    like i can see it as it happens
    very good work.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Suicidal Love

    Wow! this is amazing! i can really picture what your going through.
    great poem, well done

    xXxSLxXx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Your pain sorrows me. The poem in itself seems to be a great way for you to relinquish some of the horrors that you are living.

    I hope that you will soon find happiness and continue to write.

    When we are full of emotion and just trying to let those emotions out of our shell then there is no way one can judge.

    The important fact is that you have found an outlet and that healing may continue on for you.

    The rawness of your soul being exposed grips my heart and makes me wish that I could be there to hold you close.

    May you find happiness

    ~~Sher

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    Wow this is very emotional and well written poem. 5/5 is the best deal. You deserve it...

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