Comments : Heartless

  • 16 years ago

    by Brie Anna

    I really liked this one keep up the awesome work 5/5

    *~*bee*~*

  • 16 years ago

    by WhoThisWayComes

    Well done

  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    Ahhh yes...the world we enter when our heart's been broken. Nothing matters anymore...until that day when love finds us once again...and we do it all over :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Sarah

    That was good. You brought a lot of emotion throughout the whole matter.

    useless
    motionless
    thoughtless
    all because I'm heartless

    This was awesome, you rhymed so well, yet so sad.

    Touch the poet's inner heart.

    Great JOB! 5.5

  • 15 years ago

    by she

    This was great, loved the last part!

  • 15 years ago

    by suleika

    I really like this poem.

  • 15 years ago

    by sandy

    Nice! very touchy:O)

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    Very creative poem. nice work