Holding onto friendship

Such a wonderful, truthful piece.
I loved the ending.
'For our world would be so empty
Some say it might even end
If somewhere on this Earth
Someone did not have a friend'
WOW! 5/5. Em xx

I must say this is an amazing poem, I loved the meaning to it. And, in a way it's kind of a sad poem but at the same time it shows how much you appreciate friends and so on. You did a great job.

There were a few things :
Friends love you through the good times
And struggle through the bad

^^ With those lines, I think maybe you could take out the word " and " then replace it with 'you'?

But in the end we love each other
More than we've ever had

^^ I don't like " had " even though it rhymes and so on, I think there's probably other larger words than " had " . Sometimes bad is a good word to rhyme with, but had isn't. And, 'we've' well it doesn't sound that good, maybe putting " we have" instead, to make it more dictated.

Love grows as time goes on
For each other, one and all
For we always have someone
To catch us if we fall

^^ That's okay, not my favorite lines but no real problems with it, either.

If we struggle through a problem
Friends are always there
To help you find the answer
You love them more then air

^^ That is so true, and I love those lines so much.

For our world would be so empty
Some say it might even end
If somewhere on this Earth
Someone did not have a friend

^^ two words; AMAZING ENDING.

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So, overall maybe try larger rhyming words in some spots (all and whatever it rhymed with as well as bad/had).

That's it, lol. Amazing job. (:
I absolutely loved this poem.

Nice poem. It would have been nice if it was a little longer though. 5/5

This is really good. I love the writing style. and its very true. real friends are always there for us. 5/5