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by Cellina Rodriguez   Mar 27, 2008


A winding path through your door
a cold breath not heard
alone in a place i call home
is it a good day or a bad?
i haven't learned
i want to know
should i stay or go from this hell that even my sisters call home
or should i just understand that hell isn't a place its just all around me
Even if i leave this place called home

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  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie

    This poem is interesting. Not the best Ive read but certainly unique. One line in particular stood out for me amongst all others because I felt in that line, all the pain in the poem.

    "alone in a place i call home"

    I believe that with this line you are summarising the lives of so many people! Broken homes are common these days and broken people even more so. I believe u capture that in this line brilliantly!

    Keep it up!

    Also, if you get some time, please have a read over my poetry and let me know what you think!

    Natalie M. Sarantos

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