Leaving my world

by miracle   Mar 27, 2008


What do u when you wake up and your world is twisted up side down.
your moving away from everyone and everything you've ever know.
the one you love standing there as you leave when you see there eyes swell up even tho there putting on a brave face.
then gone with out a trace.
your body trembles as you pull your self away from your world...that you created.

alone again...new beautiful place through everyone eles's eyes.
in yours you see pain from you and the fact that your away from everything real.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sidney C

    Away from everything real is my dream..... moving and starting over seems like heaven to me.... untill now.... now i know it's not all it seems. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by eponine lovefool

    Thank you for commenting on my poem : )
    lovely poem,really unique and sad 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    I liked it...good way in telling your feelings...

  • 17 years ago

    by Ares

    It's a beautiful poem this, hun:) really heartfelt and moving:)

  • 17 years ago

    by jayson salvador

    Wow. beautiful. i really like how you express your inner most deepest feelings. very talented.

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