Random feelings

by Hannah   Mar 28, 2008


Ignoring the pride
ignoring the pain
waiting for my blood
to seep in and stain
thoughts are racing
through my mind
words for him
but these, unkind
the blade is as sharp
as the pain inside
ill never let go,
but ill always know why
my emotions that inside are kept
come out through
the scars that are left
you look at me
i look fine
i try to show you
you dont see the sign
the end is near
so is the fear
the end insight
all ends... tonight

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  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    This is really good for some random feelings! lol.

    look fine i try to show you you dont see the sign
    the end is near
    so is the fear
    the end insight
    all ends... tonight

    ^ i really liked these lines. however, the first one i would split in half so that it doesn't interrupt the flow. however..i like "the end is near, so is the fear" it's just a really great set of lines. it flows superbly.

    wonderful job.. ^.^

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