The nights here are cold,
I long for your warm embrace.
Hear your sweet whisper in my ear,
To remind me that I'm safe.

^ aww....sweetie, that's so nice. and it's true...i know what it's like to be hugged by somebody you love and just feel so amazingly warm and safe and wonderful. i know.

When I find myself alone,
I'll look up at the sky, pick a star.
One almost as beautiful is you,
Then pray you'll never be too far.

^ what a wonderful reminder, dear....a beautiful star. "one almost as beautiful AS (not is) you"

I feel so empty when you're gone,
I count the minutes we're apart.
Then the cycle starts all over again,
Whenever we finally decide to depart.

^ lmao....we all know this is true kaylalala. but it's sweet. this stanza is has some longing in it...you can tell you weren't with him and it hurts you.

Every time I see your amazing smile,
There's a little sparkle in your eyes.
I can't believe that after all this time,
You still manage to give me butterflies.

^ it's ridiculous..butterflies. and you really just caught that in this stanza...i got them just thinking about the person who gives htem to me.

I love you more than anything,
My entire heart, my true love.
Truly the best thing in my life,
Wonderful angel sent from above.

^ angels are such wonderful things to have...be so grateful he's your angel...i know what it's like to watch an angel...and not have him.

So now I am offering you a love,
One so pure and from the soul.
I hope you will accept it and hold on,
Finally making this broken heart whole

^ i love this last line. my favorite line of the whole day.

darling...you're such a beautiful writer with such a beautiful heart...i love you lots and lots. i bet he's gonna love it. great job.

Amazing poem kayla. the guy you love is very lucky to have you love him so much. The poem clearly showed how much you love him and if he can't see it he's blind.

The nights here are cold,
I long for your warm embrace.
Hear your sweet whisper in my ear,
To remind me that I'm safe.

This first stanza put a nice image in my head. a sweet awww kinda image that made me a bit jealous I admit cause I want that too.

When I find myself alone,
I'll look up at the sky, pick a star.
One almost as beautiful as you,
Then pray you'll never be too far.

awww this was sweet too. I like the part about picking a star. the rhyming on this one was quite good kayla.

I feel so empty when you're gone,
I count the minutes we're apart.
Then the cycle starts all over again,
Whenever we finally decide to depart.

I can recognize the feeling. you described it so I could understand and I could relate in a different, but similar way. The imagery was very clear here kayla.

You're my soul mate, I know it,
We were made just for each other.
I want us to experience everything together,
And someday be your future children's mother.

hehe kayla wants kiddies. XD This stanza shows very clearly how committed you are to him.

Every time I see your amazing smile,
There's a little sparkle in your eyes.
I can't believe that after all this time,
You still manage to give me butterflies.

That's very cute kayla I was reading it and I'm like I like the part about the smile and the eyes. I can picture it. but then the part about still getting butterflies was just a very sweet statement that i can believe when you put it like this and when it's coming from you.

We might be separated now,
Miles and miles apart.
But, I will promise you this,
You are the keeper of my heart.

This was a broad stanza that a lot of people could relate to, but I coudl also tell that it also held true in it's own personal meaning when you said it. nicely put.

I love you more than anything,
My entire heart, my true love.
Truly the best thing in my life,
Wonderful angel sent from above.

Like I said. lucky to have you kayla. this shows that you love him and that you think the world of him. your emotions are very clear.

Never leave my side, darling,
I need you when sky's are grey.
Protecting me from all harm,
And keep the nightmares at bay.

oh how I can relate to this stanza, but in a different way. this poem can be taken universilly (I can't spell) or it can be seen on the very level you're writing it. How you are writing it from you and just for him. Nice and clear.

So now I am offering you a love,
One so pure and from the soul.
I hope you will accept it and hold on,
Finally making this broken heart whole.

Overall my favorite stanza in the poem. it shows with pure honesty how willing you are to put yourself into your relationship with him and how much you trust him not to be another person to break your heart.

I hope this was detailed enough for you kayla. I thought it was a very good and sweet poem. it showed how much you love him. 5/5 from me.

Wow, what a beautiful write! Such wonderful wording, i really liked this alot. Especially these lines,
"When I find myself alone,
I'll look up at the sky, pick a star.
One almost as beautiful as you,
Then pray you'll never be too far."
A great piece of work! 5/5.

I miss the girl i love.... i loved this poem! It was very calm but says alot. 5\5

I like these lines;

We might be separated now,
Miles and miles apart.
But, I will promise you this,
You are the keeper of my heart.

Great work and keep it up. I will come back and read more of your work.

A beautiful poem of love. Great job.

Very sweet, I can relate completely to it.

Truly Beautiful Hun.
As always I am smiling after reading one of your pieces. This was really sweet and full of love.You did a really good job, as you always do...

Keep it up sweetie. 5/5
--Elly.

Wow you're a very talented writer, I love reading your poems. 5/5

Good job 5/5

Wowww!!! loved the last line..:) keep it up girl!

I cannot tell you how much i loved this poem. so many emotions were expressed, so pure and heartfelt. wow i loved it! a great flow, everything a poem needs.

Every time I see your amazing smile,
There's a little sparkle in your eyes.
I can't believe that after all this time,
You still manage to give me butterflies.

i loved that stanza the most, mainly because i could really relate to it. it reminds me of my first love. this poem really touched me, it was beautiful. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.