I sure like this one. ^^
Made me feel uncomfortable... The way I feel when I can't sleep...
This is a good thing: means the poem describes it very well... At least, in my opinion.

And I really love the sentence:
"So much for counting sheep"
So true! ::)

Keep up the great work!

Fantastic this poem is neat I loved it I like how it focus on what is going on around u that is what my mind does also when I can't sleep I can way relate

O.O OMGOSH!! jennifer this is a beautiful poem, i mean its sad but the words you chose were sooo unique and very remarkable. your so good at what you do and say, i give you a 100/100 if i could. i love ya ^_^

xoxox
your bestest friend ever!
travis !!

That is really good!!!

Wow amazing opening stanza.Lead into a great poem.good job.5/5

This is definately different!
But it's worded perfectly and it flowed flawlessly.
I enjoyed reading it!
5/5

Yea i hate insomnia
feel your pain
good poem described insomnia well