Great job on this piece. The emotins can be felt in all your words. Imagery is awesome.

I slowly sank to nothing,
just waiting for my depart.
As these weights are bounded,
to nothing but my heart.

This stanza is so heartfelt.
Excellent!
Take Care Cindy

Thats good work xx

I slowly sank to nothing,
just waiting for my depart.
As these weights are bounded,
to nothing but my heart.

Son,

You make beautiful poems.....I really mean that!
Keep writing, alright?

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid

Good poem.

Good poem.

Love it.
AMAZING work
the words make a picture in my mind
yeaaa good jobbb :]

WOW!!

i loved every single line in this poem! it was amazing. and it was expressed so well. please, keep up the wonderful work! and keep those poems coming =]