I think it was a very good poem. I especially liked this part "I've had to watch my friends and family die / I've see eternal darkness grow in the sky" I know how it is:(
Keep writing and stay strong *hugs*
Very beautiful poem! One thing though:
"Why did I fall into this hell?
I made it to heaven, but then I feel"
I think you meant "fell" right? *wonders* except for that, it was a real pleasure to read. Keep up the writing! 5/5
I really loved this poem and this is the first time i have read your poem and i can say that i will be reading more, this is beautiful..very heartfelt and touching but i hope that is not what you feel and is going though, i can't help but take every poem serious..
wish you all the best
keep the great work up...