Floating on the wind

by Amber Smith   Apr 1, 2008


The wind moans in the pines,
the river swirls,
by the bent grass,
and the stars hang,
above the broad plain,
the swirling great river,
the moon's a float,

Oh where's my name,
among the ranks,

Drifting,drifting,
what am i more,
than a single bird,
flying in the sky,

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  • 16 years ago

    by Shanna

    Hey Amber
    it's me Shanna that poem was awsome girl!
    and we are going to have to hangout again!!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxSINISTERxX

    Awsome poem! it has good thought :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Colby

    Very strong and powerful, point well taken.... you pulled the type of poem off. Very good

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really good xx

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