OMG thats So cute!!

Wow this is good, I can like relate to this, I htink most people can.

Edit:
In this line:
Am i even a part of your memory.
You're asking a question, so use a question mark.
You're inconsistent with your punctuation. There are some places with periods and other places ignored.
I only found one lower case I so go edit it an make it capital.

Response:
It was all right. I felt it was too inconsistent with rhyming, though. It wasn't a bad poem, it just wasn't my favorite. I loved the set up though. Ya know, the remember me thing you did. That was cool. So, the set up was cool, the concept was pretty neat, it was inconsistent, and you need to focus on punctuation and one capitalization.

Rating:
I'll give it a three.

The best thing i love about this poem is the rhyme, i like rhymes, makes your work more interesting. Keep it up

The best thing i love about this poem is the rhyme, i like rhymes, makes your work more interesting. Keep it up

I love this poem! its great! keep up the GREAT work! xoxoxoxoxo

Great poem! 5/5

Awww....so sad...i know how this feels
i ask that to myself all the time about my x
great use of words and it had amazing flow!
5/5 <33

WOW!! beautifully wrriten Meg!! bravo *claps* take a bow. 5/5
keep up the good work! (plz)

I like how you kept asking the question about whether or not they remember you.

And to describe all the things that you used to do really ties the emotions together and allows the reader to experience you loss with you.

~Sher

Awsome poem...

I lyke this one o o
U
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I lyke this one o o 5/5
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Wow this reminds me of me and my ex girlfriend

but this poem is very good I love it it is on my favorite list now

I really honest to the man up stairs liek this one damn sound like the person who this was written for lost someone special

Great job on the poem. I know just what you're going through. Thanks for commenting on mine!

Nice emotional poem its really good and i know were u are coming from ppl just 4 get about u not thinking about everyhing u do 4 them

I lyke this poem a lot ", 5/5