Wow, the begining atually gave my shivers down my spine! the sense of darkness just kept me reading until the end! 5/5
xoxo
~me~

Thank you

Awesome Poem.
Extremely Deep.

Keep Up The Good Work. And Thanks For The Comment.

^^ ty..i worked hard on this...

Nice poem :)
5/5

Wow intence! i love it its great! you have a gift! keep up the great work!

!~Emmy!~

It was definitely very intense, I liked the way you setting it up. I wanted to keep reading it. good job =] 5/5.

Wondeful poem, i couldnt stop reading it. :)

Yeah...most of my poems i write are speaking of me in school...

Beautiful!! Good job, continue to write beautiful poems :]

I really enjoyed this poem. It was very well written and great to read. The flow was wonderful. Keep it up! 5/5
~Forever Broken~

Aww,lol
i likes this poem, it was like a story...but real,
ur a great poet...

Wow I kno dis feeling very well, I really love dis one!!! U r really good...

Wow!!!!! omg!!!!! that was so very unexpenting!!!!!!!!! that was a great poem!!!!!!!

Wow this was deep and beautiful. i loved this piece. very powerful, and it held so much meaning.

Darkness takes over my life
Sending me into eternal darkness
With no hope and broken wings
It seems no one could save me

i loved those lines. they really caught my attetion, a great beginning. job well done. 5/5.

oh, and by the way i love anime too! it rockss.

-Ashlei.

I am the darkness you feer so much and the ange lof light is my kin, to feer the darkness you feer me so stop feering mylady, for i am the ange lof darkness and i am you kin so no longer should you feer the darkness the the darkness in.

GREAT! 5/5