Life And Death

by Simply Trying   Apr 5, 2008


Drowning in a pool of tears
Light darkening,soul diminishing
Life fading, no escape
But all of a sudden you show up
And the light brightens
You wiped my tears away
And brought me back to life
You stopped all my crying
Then you left
And now I'm dying

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  • 16 years ago

    by maya

    I know the feeling...
    I'm sick of saying "nice poem",or "sweet",or something like that,but i don't know what else to say!!:)

  • 16 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Wow really liked your poem.=)

  • 16 years ago

    by brokenbutterfly

    Yet another great poem...i dont know how you do it lol....but there all so great

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