Screaming for love

I think more rhyming could help these out alot, and the rhythm is slightly askew, but all things considered there's no way i could let myself say that it's not at least good.
"hold me now
don't let go"
i liked those lines cuz i know what thats like, and i hope you find what ur lookin for. it just takes patience i believe. don't worry about finding it as soon as possible, just worry about finding it. if you want it, go and get it, but don't stop the rest of your life to do so. nobody wants you to do that, and there's plenty of people who would say the same thing. there's a girl out there for you, she just doesn't know it yet. you just have to find her, and show her how much she loves you. good luck =)

Thanks for the comment,

its not easy 6 years i was with my last one and it ended horribley and i hate that it did but sometimes its better live life with out love and all theresposbilitys of it maybe its showing you its your time for your self look after your self take up somein you always wanted. just dont let wanting love control you

Good luck