First off, this is truly touching, heartfelt write. I deeply enjoyed in the whole piece. Usually, I don't like to read friendship poems but this one is great. You pulled me in with interesting first stanza and kept my attention with fantastic descriptions and good rhythm. I like your rhymes because they helped to create such flawless and captivating flow of the whole piece. You put a lot of emotions into this, and they simply flow through each line. I like the fact that not one part of this poem, despite the length, seem forced. You created amazing, so vivid imagery that took me on the poetical journey while your poem unraveled. Overall, this is truly enjoyable, great read.
It's an amazing poem. I can relate to it in so many ways. It was written beautifully. Defiantely had to be from the heart. I can't see a flaw in it at all. It's long, but I love long poems. Great job. Keep up the great work.