by efstathia Apr 6, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
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Same words came out of your mouth |
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Aww.. this was a sad yet strong poem... You can tell you're hurt but stay strong and that's admirable.. I loved the title and I love how it was the last line of the poem... Well done! |
by deadly sun
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Good poem, i could really feel you coming through your words. Nice work. |
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I loved this poem, 5/5 u did a good job, i hope to read more from you..... |
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I loved this poem, 5/5 u did a good job, i hope to read more from you..... |
by Hear You Me
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I can SO relate to this, i had an experience recently and this sums it up. i love the way you have used different rhyme schemes and different stanza styles, if you get me. it seems to really flow |