by Ares Apr 7, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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Tell your dad, |
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This is pretty good! Confident last line, the whole thing makes you think and wonder what happened--good job. |
by Goodbye
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This is an interesting poem.. I liked it...Only thing I was missing was to make this more powerful... But, this is only a suggestion... :) |