Great job you did a real good job
i bet it is even better in russian
i would like to read it in russian if i knew russian
but yeah very good job
i liked it alot
and thx for the comment
glad you enjoyed it:D:D

Keenan

Wonderful poem and well translated. i could understand it. its wonderfully written and explained. keep writing i like that i can imagine these things you describe to an extent.

Excellent!

Is this really written in Russian?
Wow! anyways, All of the lines were smooth, they rhyme and imagery is great. For me it was really short but definitely complete with style and have such message on it. I also love the title.

Keep it up!
Veamm

This poem is a lot better than the last one I commented. The stanzas were orginized and the subject was clear. The rhymes matched the messege perfectly, and the imagary objects gave this poem it's right mood. Nice job 5/5

Yet agian you have written another unique piece. Your style definately acentuates your feelings and the way each stanza first starts almost with an idea that continues throughout that stanza.
I'm amazed by your talent and have lost all words to shower any more praise onto your work! 1mil/5