Wonderful Rose

"Beautiful but harmful,
Lovely but doubtful." Contrast is important in poetry and I liked how you commented this person but said something bad about them. Good contrast.

"Wonderful Rose
its you I chose,
Sweet to the toes
but danger to the bones,
Clear view of my heart,
My cruel heart you could cut."

Good rhyming scheme I liked it. This girl in the poem reminds me of posion ivy. Beautiful but deadly. You would give everything for her but you know you could die at the end of it.
"I believe its a sickness,
but be it a weakness" I like how instead of going straight into a weakness like most poets do, you say that it could be a sickness at first and are doubtful to it before you actually admit it is a weakness.

"Dear wonderful rose,
its you I chose.
Bright like the moon,
as calm as noon

Surely,
You are my beautiful and colourful Rose. "

Such a sweet way to end a poem, I liked it beautifully written. Contrasts with flowers are good, flowers are pure beauty and this is what this poem is.

Well i though it was beautiful.great job:)

Thanx, this means alot to me. not alot of people comment on my poems so im greatful, your words give me hope

This poem is amazing. It touched my heart.
I would like to vote this poem for nominations and I will also like to give this poem a 5/5, Keep up the awesome work, I'll be looking forward to reading more of your poems. great work!