Ouch. Your poems sound much like the way one of my friends write...Deep, dark and sad

I know how that feels and u r right, u r poem is really good i like it alot.

..GEE that poem was real deep.
i was at that point, but something stopped me. it was this guy. its ok. i know it sucks when someone just breaks something so dear and special, something like your heart and hopeing it will heal. but just remember and have faith[[:

Pretty much sums it up, enough said 5/5

Thats sad.. and deep.. but killing your self its never worth it not even to try it loves .. i know from experience the feeling of wanting to do it and trying to but something always stopped me you know. i dont know you but you have something to live for

Wow.

It's sad, but kinda true *

Nice job!

Wow.

great poem.
it stood out, and was really good.
it was deep, and felt realy heartfelt.
if this really happened to you, i hope you find someone, who will gain ur trust again, and not break it.

keep up the good writting though ^^

Dont do it!!!! keep writing, you are a special peson put on this planet for us to enjoy!

Great poem, sad but true 5/5

Wow! This one reminds me of my friend. His gf broke up with him and he was going to end it. Scary, she was a bith haha thats mean!

Anyways...yes! Very very good!
Good job!
=D

Sad..kind of creepy, but great flow and an interesting write.