A flood of tears

by Sarah   Apr 12, 2008


As I lay down on this beach,
soaked in salty water covered with sand...
I revoke an old memory & revive a sweet melody
Of an oath you once made
In your own words, you said:
''Even though our song has ended,our melody still plays..
Even though we're not who we use to be, our love is our safe shore that will bring you back to me''
remember this oath
remember this promise
As I let go to the forces of darkness

She had to go
She had to leave...
You broke me when you set me free
A vow I made that I'll always be...
But this I never promised thee,
I'll drown myself in misery
Flood myself in tears...

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  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    ''Even though our song has ended,our melody still plays..
    Even though we're not who we use to be, our love is our safe shore that will bring you back to me''
    ^^ I love these lines!!! They blew me away!
    A really good poem, I enjoyed every word!

    Hugs,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by withlove

    This poem was good. i really liked it
    the use of the quote really added a lot to the poem and i loved the whole second part
    She had to go
    She had to leave...
    You broke me when you set me free
    A vow I made that I'll always be...
    But this I never promised thee,
    I'll drown myself in misery
    Flood myself in tears...
    something about the rhyme and flow of it was just great
    good job
    5/5
    =D

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