Far Away, Miles Apart (Collab)

by Italian Stallion   Apr 13, 2008


For a friend close and dear,
How I wish you were near.
Far away, miles apart,
Nothing compares for the way I truly feel.

From the very start
Our hearts connected.
Lovers we once were,
But friends forever more.

There is an ache still residing
Every time we speak.
Left hanging on to your every word,
Wishing we could once again be.

My love for you still lingers,
There is no doubt entangled.
Wishing you were once again mine
To love and cherish forever.

© Copyright 2008 By: Italian Stallion and Sherry Lynn

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Collaboration with Sherry Lynn

Sherry Lynn: http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=41444
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  • 16 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    This collab was a bit more diificult for me; however, I am pleased with the overall finish.

    Anytime you need another partner just hit me up. I would be honored!

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This piece posses remarkable, captivating beauty in every stanza which is simply breathtaking.
    The flow seem flawless through the whole piece and that adds great effect to the expressed emotions that form lovely and very vivid pictures within the reader's thoughts.
    Simplicity of this poem created interesting atmosphere. The whole poem holds tones of deep, heartfelt sadness which made it even more powerful for me.
    You two did a great job on this piece, it is impressive that two writers can portray such compact piece that is able to touch the reader deeply.
    I can't find anything to critique here, whole poem seem truly flawless.

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