Much better with the context, puncuation, and even the adjectives.... other than that... all I can say I suppose is thank you! Quickly done as well... must have come to you in a "matter-of -fact" way... ~Anita
Wow this one i can totally relate to 100% right now and i loved every minute of the read. i dont know how similar our meanings are behind the words but i have loved a girl who have have been close but sometimes distance friends with for 3 years now and i struggle with holding back my love to maintain our friendship but i want to be honest have have trust to build our relationship.
sorry if i bored you by relating your poem to my life but i really liked it 5/5 keep writing :]
The flow was alright, but I didn't think it was all that great. The variation of line lengths didn't help it much. A few were extremely long and others were shorter. Anyways, the message was amazing. Truly a poem written from deep within someone's heart. True feelings portrayed here. Beautiful. 5/5.