Comments : Justified Affection

  • 11 years ago

    by azurelady

    Much better with the context, puncuation, and even the adjectives.... other than that... all I can say I suppose is thank you! Quickly done as well... must have come to you in a "matter-of -fact" way... ~Anita

  • 11 years ago

    by azurelady

    Great... I pick on you....... and then I let a type-o on punctuation stick out like a sore thumb... nice one huh????? LOL!!! ~Anita

  • 11 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Wow this one i can totally relate to 100% right now and i loved every minute of the read. i dont know how similar our meanings are behind the words but i have loved a girl who have have been close but sometimes distance friends with for 3 years now and i struggle with holding back my love to maintain our friendship but i want to be honest have have trust to build our relationship.
    sorry if i bored you by relating your poem to my life but i really liked it 5/5 keep writing :]

  • 11 years ago

    by azurelady

    Hey you, They say that turn-about is fair play, right??? Check out "The catacombs of the heart" when you get a chance... You may recognize the context somewhat....... LOL!!! ~Anita

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is the kind of poem that can only come from the heart yet many can relate to turning romance to reality in this beautful well rhymed poem

    I am impressed 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    The flow was alright, but I didn't think it was all that great. The variation of line lengths didn't help it much. A few were extremely long and others were shorter. Anyways, the message was amazing. Truly a poem written from deep within someone's heart. True feelings portrayed here. Beautiful. 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This poem holds beautiful emotion =]
    Great job, i really did enjoy reading it 5/5
    Good chioce of heading to match the poem too ^^

  • 10 years ago

    by Timothy

    Not bad. I think you could have gave it a little better structure. it flowed well

  • 10 years ago

    by Paiger

    Utterly Beautiful, I love your way with words, its all very origional :)