Call me a lover

by Ares   Apr 14, 2008


Lover's in,
the moonlight,
kissing and,
caressing.

making it,
worth while,
breaking it,
it doesn't heal.

make me scream again,
careful when you kiss,
my wanting lips.
call me a lover.

stars and wine,
makes her shine,
waking up,
it's Monday.

making it,
worth while,
breaking it,
it doesn't heal.

make me scream again,
careful when you kiss,
my wanting lips.
call me a lover.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    WOW!!!! I love this poem, I think it's hottt.
    Wish this was happening to me.

  • 16 years ago

    by erin girl

    THe commas did kind of throw me off here and there. But i do think some of them are necessary, it makes an interesting flow. I love the idea and the repetition used.

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this great job....5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Very good! Full of emotion--the only thing is that you have a lot of unnecessary commas that kind of break the flow of the poem. Otherwise, good job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Wow, sounds like honey to my ears... :)

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