Vicious Circle Mindset

by Curing the Comon Cliche   Apr 18, 2008


A vicious circle mindset
Believing all the dreams
Body's loosing oxygen
Lungs collapsing, you can't scream

Please don't fall, Dear Reader
You might cut your hands
On the shards of broken glass
Glass intertwined with sand

Gravity pulls you to the ground
Blood dances with the dirt
Broken hearts cut up your hand
Shards of heart can make you hurt

As your eyes see blood
You lips let slip a scream
Lungs collapse with no air left
Because you believed the dream

"In another moment Alice was through the glass, and had jumped lightly down into the Looking-glass room"
~Lewis Carroll

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  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    Wow, very beautiful. broken hearts r hard 2 get thru but remeber, the intimate love of boyfriend and girlfriend is not the only love out there. expecially wen it comes 2 friends and family. 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Sad, i love how you relate a poem to a quote!
    unique

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    You know that feeling, on rollercoasters, where your stomach bottoms out?

    tada!!

    seriously...amazing...and you do think in circles, or at least you talk in them..

    Lungs collapse with no air left
    Because you believed the dream

    ^ flippin....wow...

    5/5 jesse..

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