A New Drug Problem

Wow. wen all hope is lost...wat is left 2 hold on2? sometimes it's better 2 have hope rather then just give up...that's the easy way out. well, great poem 5/5
xoxo
~waiting~

p.s. where's the little quote at the bottom? i look forward 2 that!! >:l

Ok. real comment time....

Overdosing on hope

^ if ever i OD on something..that would be what i would want it to be...because you can always recover..

Believing the dreams
Just like smoking dope
Hurts more than it heals
And your'RE wasting your time

^ no kidding...it feels like that a lot lately..

Put on a smiley face
Say that you are fine
And let people on their way
Brilliant lie
They walk away
They're better not knowing

^ it's funny how in school, they tell us..knowledge is the best way to fight drugs. so somebody tell me...what's the best way to fight aloneness?

great poem jesse...of course.

I love this poem very much, i think many can relate to it.
5/5

This is good...i give you props for this poem...4/5

Good job....((if i comment now...well.not going to)) 5/5