I liked this, it had a nice beat, it passed as having a rhyme scheme, certainly.
you gave it not just emotion, but you made the lines tell their own story: you didn't know what was coming next, save for "why big brother, why," obvisously.
5/5

I like a lot this poem because I know what you felt when you wrote it...
I'm sorry for ure brother but I think that he's proud of you,wherever he is..
take good care of you
5/5 for sure ;)
michelle xxx

This was an amayzing poem!
It felt so real while i was reding it.
It made me thinnk f someone i know.
It was very powerful and very good
i really liked it!

Hi great poem, I can relate to it :-(....

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Good job on this poem, I love it! Every stanza was written so well and you wrote such powerful words. You expressed your feeling well, and it is a very sad poem.
Keep writing! :)