Your Angel's Fall

by HidinVictim   Apr 19, 2008


Hard-Knox school of life:

As you take her to new heights
This fish just wouldn't bite,
But I still dream about that night
And I know thats not right.

To you my love was sworn,
By you my heart was torn,
For my emotions I shall mourn.

As he battles from the start
For a heart that was not sought ,
But he will soon be taught;
My past is to be fought,

You sat her in that car
Made her hot and beg for more,
As I called her a wh0re,
I throbbed for you some more.

Now I'm thinking of our fight,
Laughing in my face...
His biggest mistake
With that came so much hate,
And a past that I could taste.

So this is my fate,
Misguided love, and hate
My only lasting traits...

very complicated poem, and you kind of have to explain a lot of it to really understand it... so pm me if you want the background info, I'll try my best to explain

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  • 16 years ago

    by Inuhanyo

    Muh? Have I done something wrong? I liked the peom structuraly though.