Sexy Siler Blade

I've never felt this way

Hands twitching for my blade,

My soul I would trade

For my sexy silver blade,

See I left him at home

But now I'm feeling alone,

My soul I would trade

For my sexy silver blade,

So he can make his list

Of shame across my wrist,

Right on the vein he fits

Long, slow slits

As crimson drips

Its the floor I hit

I have no soul to miss

Thanks to my sexy silver blade

working on personification and i would love some advise thank you!!