Edit:
Shouldn't your title be My Heart Beats for Two? You left out the S in beats. :)

You spelled sacrificed wrong.

Other than that, this was a nice poem. The rhyming scheme was pretty consistent and though I don't understand it completely, I loved the title. What do you mean for two? It made it sound like it was about loving or liking two people, but it wasn't.

Overall this was a pretty good poem. Not the best in the whole world but it was good. I'll give it a four.

Jenn, its for just one person. Look and reread carefully

Good poem dustin
**harlea

Dang dude, this poem is something. Nice stanza. 5/5

Such a sweet poem your girl is lucky to have some one with such talent