Mm, Another poem I liked to read. Full of passion, Full of mixed emotions. Not a bad way to share your love for someone. I am sure this person is mighty lucky to have a poem dedicated to them or about them. I love these kinds of poems.

another 5/5 for you hun. :) Keep writing for you are a great poet.

Another enjoyable poem to read! You write with passion and so much feeling and emotion. These two lines were so sweet!:

"It's the soothing waves in the ocean blue,
when i stand at the beach just thinking of you."

Throughout this poem, I could see the whole picture in my head. Nice writing!

;o
very good !
sounds like quite a boy.

Wow! this is really good i love how you can express your emotion so clearly i like how discriptive you are! good job!

Last stanza, second line, it's hear, not here.

Last stanza, second to last line, it's my, not me.

Same critique as the last one with the capitalization stuff.

I think you should have gone more in depth with this poem. I felt a lot of it was repetition. The whole poem was basically saying, oh I love you and think about you all the time. That's great, but the way you're poem is setup I felt it could have gone into deeper though with metaphors and unique words or just describe more how he makes you feel or what goes through your mind.