Comments : Answer to her cries (collab with another broken record)

  • 11 years ago

    by SuicideNotes2Poems

    That was nice it was really good
    i liked it, you two did a good job...
    witch person did you write???

  • 11 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    I wish i could put the words I know are in my heart, but i cant...all I can say is..."Simply amazing". But hten again, i know who wrote it.....they are always amazing....5/5.......xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammi

    This is the perfect poem you 2 did a great job for I am going through this right now I am thr non-cutter and thanks for some words to use. 5/5

    Tammi,

  • 11 years ago

    by Nawa

    That is a great, strong, powerful poem from the beginning to the end. Every word used fit perfectly and holds deep meaning.

    "these scars on my arm, they tell stories
    they will never be just memories, they always haunt me in my dreams.

    Are you so blind to the world
    That you cannot see?
    Every time you burst through skin
    Little pieces die inside of ME"

    I think this part was the best the non-cutter part was really touching.
    Great job. Well done.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Nice poem....
    Read my peom "Child Beggar Noshi"
    Rate and comment it,to let me know how you took it while reading

  • 11 years ago

    by Muhammad Junaid

    Nice poem....
    Read my peom "Child Beggar Noshi"
    Rate and comment it,to let me know how you took it while reading

  • 11 years ago

    by jay

    This is...amazing. just plain and simple. you have a great gift, never let it tarnish. def 5/5
    and thank you for the comment. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Rosalinda Dolot

    Knowing your young age, you're such a gifted young girl to compose a wonderful and meaningful poem. Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Tina Marie

    Its such a powerful poem, I give props to you and your friend that wrote it with you. but it is great!

  • 11 years ago

    by charles

    Am really moved- didn't know anyone could write like that. A gem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Aish

    Wow, that was really good!
    I like how youve done it as a conversation-i can really relate (im the non cutter) i have said similar things to friends going through hard times.
    There was also good use of language and rhyme.
    Well done,
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Wow fantastic poem, i love the way itflows, and what it means.thank you

  • 11 years ago

    by Lori

    Wow...this is so deep. It kind of leaves you depressed after you read it! Lol but its a good depressed:) Haha its great! I love the wording to it and everything! Love it all girl!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenny P

    Absolutely amazing. I really really loved it. So beautiful.

  • 8 years ago

    by momopixie18

    Oh,very nice job,really touched me, powerful, i like the collab, you and gabby made a good team for writing on this one :]