Cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuteeeeeee poem! XD me vote 5/5 cute cute cute adorable!

Good job :)

kids will sure get a kick outa it. :)

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Good job :)

kids will sure get a kick outa it. :)

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Good job :)

kids will sure get a kick outa it. :)

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OMG!this poem made me laugh,cry;of happiness,and got me angry;because it isnt real.lol.I love your imagination!I wouldve obviousely never thought of that.Right on!!!

Hahahaha i would LOVE to live there!!! but then i would get really fat!! LOL i give ya a 5/5!!

U gotta hell good imagination if only if only!!!! its a lil short though and i must agree wid hoo eva wrote it isnt very powerful u should try write another version of that poem...one a bit longer and maybe sophisticated it would be really gud i bet ya!!!

Lol thats really cute =]

O CHES THIS POEM ROCKS...NOT ONLY CUZ I LOVE CANDY BUT CUZ IT RYMES

Dat is sooo cute n funny... like it!!!!

Haha nicee!!! i wish it was reall!!!

Hee hee hee hee hee!!!!!! that was F.U.N.N.Y.!!!!! i loved it!!!! kool-ei-ooo!!!! WOW!!!

Oh come on...that could have been a lot better. That's not a world full of candy, that's just a small theme park. Not bad anyway. :)

This is cool like i said befor I like the
way you put things It like you see the world
in a diffent way

Lol this so very much reminds me of a poem i wrote describing scenery as candy. i wish you had extended it a bit more. next time i want to see something bigger than willy wonka's chocolate factory lol this definitely gave me the urge to run to the store and get some munchies. :)

nice use of color scheme and metaphor. cute write. love and peace.

It is really really good and it makes me want candy alot

Hehe im drooling.