Comments : My Girls

  • 15 years ago

    by 0oAshleyo0

    :(
    imma miss you!
    you help me so much and i just want you to know that i really really appreciate it!

    Much Much love!!!!

    <3
    Ashley

    (i even took the XxxX's down for you) hehe

  • 15 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    WHAT?! you are leaving?!
    You should get a library card. Libraries usually have computers you can use!
    *tear*
    Who am I gonna talk to when I get new penguin socks?! =(

  • 15 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    *bawls*
    I didn't know!!!
    *bawls harder*
    : (
    *big heaving sobs*

  • 15 years ago

    by StandStill

    AHHH!!!!

    *cries*
    nooooo....I'm gonna miss you girly. you better go to the library or something and send me huge PMs once a month or something. i love you oodles. the poem was hilarious. *mwah mwah mwah*

  • 15 years ago

    by Mackenzie

    *sobs.*

    OMG.

    ilysm.

    this was my fave poem of urs. lol. i will miss you so much. u've helped me so much kris. u mean the world to me. i look up to u even tho we haven't met. i love you very much.

    loves,

    mackenzie.

    the little sister.

  • 15 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    WHAT????
    NOOOOOOO....
    you can't leave!
    *cries*

    who's going to torture creepy guys with me?? :[[

    This was sooooo sweet though..
    awwwwww!!!
    I love you!!
    *hugs*

    Your partner in torture,
    Cayce

  • 15 years ago

    by Kayla

    I love my girls
    Oh yes I do
    They're for me
    And not for you
    And if by chance
    You make them cry
    I'll break your face
    And ask you why :D

    [ This was an adorable opening to your poem. I really loved it. You made it humorous but also made sure people got the message that you love your friends and would hurt whoever hurt them first. The loyalty you have shines through in this part. ]

    I live for my girls
    I know its true
    They love me
    I know that too
    I want to hug them
    Just once more
    But I am leaving
    Like before

    [ Very true.. this makes me so sad. We will miss you so much when you are away, hunni. Don't worry, we won't forget you. But hopefully we'll still be able to keep in contact. ]

    I will miss them
    Thats no lie
    My heart will break
    And want to die
    I'll think about them
    Day and night
    I want to be there
    For every fight

    [ We will be thinking about you too, hunni. You will always be in our hearts and prayers. We'll wish the best to you and miss you like friggin crazy.. gah! That makes me wanna cry. ]

    I want to be here
    Through it all
    I want to catch you
    If you fall
    Please dont forget
    The times we've had
    Remember the good
    Forget the bad

    [ Gosh.. I just loved the rhyming here! It gave me goosebumps because it was so good. It just flowed so perfectly and was a very sweet part. Don't worry, when we remember you we'll only remember the good. ]

    I'll be back
    Its a promise I'll make
    Smile girls
    Don't let it be fake
    I'll love you all no matter what
    Stand up tall
    And kick some butt! ((tehehe))

    [ lol that's so cute! And it just shows how much you care for us and only want us to smile =) ]

    Your amazing
    And awesome too
    Every single
    Last one of you
    You'll overcome
    Good and bad
    Made stronger
    By complications you've had
    I am glad I was part of that
    To you all,
    I tip my hat

    [ I have never seen rhyming like this before. You match up the strangest things but it turns out to be so perfect in your poems, lol. Truly amazing my dear <3 ]

    Notihng can ever
    take your place
    Or make me forget
    your smiling face
    I love you all
    Please know its true
    I will never
    Ever
    Ever
    Ever Forget you.

    [ A perfect little closing to such a beautiful poem ]

  • 15 years ago

    by IfYouWantMe

    I'm not sure when you wrote this, sorry i missed it. But I'm glad u'll be back. I've missed you so.

    TWIN

  • 15 years ago

    by BornAgainWriter

    I remember they day you wrote this. You came into a thread and like demanded us all go read it.

    And, we all cried, like little babies.

    I love you.

  • 15 years ago

    by Inside the Liar

    Aww. It made me think of all my girls. It was really well written. Nice work. 5/5