Travis, this was beautiful. I loved it. The only flaws I spotted where the usual overuse of commas. Other than that it was perfect. This will make her cry for sure. Five for you.

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oh my god!
i cried!
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great job travis... great job!
courtney... please listen. dont go!
i dont know you, but you sound so amazing...please... dont go

This is so sad trav trav.made me cry.5/5
**harlea

Travis this is sooo sad im sorry to hear this but u can only do so much and the rest is up to them.Nice poem very emotional but the words were touching
5/5
Fabulous Job!!!

Great poem

Travis,

This poem is so true about me and for you. I am sorry for everything!!!! I just want you to know that our friendship ment everything to me! ANd it still does, it still shines within my broken heart. When I first met you, i met a boy who understood me for everything I was, we went through alot, i know this is true. I am your hero in your beautiful eyes of a heart but I dont care if you dont come save me or take a turn in the hero postion, i just want you to know that I dont care how you are I still want to be your friend that is true and a person that can be a hero to sore high in the sky because she knows that the person she is saving from the world is a person she can trust and love like a brother but helps me shine and protects me like a gaurdian angel. But you know i want you to regain your stregth of your wings for you can be flying right next to be, reaching our dreams with just the palm of our hands!! ANd if your heart has been ripped out all because of me, i want to give you mine and i want you to keep it and treasure all the love that is in store for you because i know i can trust you with it. I am trying to be happy, its just not that easy anymore, you know? But its not your fault, if I do stay guess what youll be helping all the way! Because the best thing someone can ever do for a friend or just a sister is stand by them and just hold onto them. Another thing when I first met you, our friendship came so fast maybe it was time to make it last not make it clash like i did to your heart and the bond i shared with such a person like you. I loved you like you were the last guy on earth and I was happy you were the one getting my love not anyone else! I still want life to end but you are making it mend not just like a trend but a person that can stand alone in the crowd and maybe even smile because she knows someone is still loving her for everything she is. Travis lurz you were my first true and only really friend as a boy.

Just thank you for everything you do
I Still want to be friends
Even a sister to you
ONe you can tell everything to like you use to
I want to take your hand
Or wrap my arms around you
And never let you go
Because God only sends so many heavenly gifts down to earth
I think i am one of those people who get one
ANd that is you
I want to always treasure you

CourtneyxHolland
Little Sister
xx
I Love You!!!!

So sad yet a wonderful poem.. 5/5...! i added u to my faves. list btw..

This poem was
beyond beautiful.
It showed so much appreciation
and acknowledgment towards a genuine friend
who hides their
pain in oder to cure that of others.
This was a really heartfelt poem!!
Well done

Omg travis u r such a good writer i love ur work.....n that is so very sweet poem.....n courtney plz hold on to him........
nikki

Omg travis u r such a good writer i love ur work.....n that is so very sweet poem.....n courtney plz hold on to him........
nikki