Hey! this is really cool in a weird kinda way.. i like it. haha

** kaitlyn .

Hey! this is really cool in a weird kinda way.. i like it. haha

** kaitlyn .

Wow! Simply outstanding job. You truly have that authentic talent to write something so unique and breath-taking, your metaphors here are fantastic.
I am honestly glad that I read this, it goes into my favorites, I really can't find anything bad about this poem. First line literally left me speechless and rest of the poem posses same quality.
Amazingly done.

First off, congrats on the win :)

Amazing poem. I've already read it but I haven't had time to leave comment then, so here it comes:

I like the whole idea for the poem, also, the fact that you said so much within just three stanza is admirable. Very original and refreshing read. Your choice of words is good along with fantastic metaphors. The first line pulled me deeply into the poem, it's utterly brilliant. This piece seem simpler than your usual writes but I truly love it.

Keep up!

Congrats on the win :)

Nice to experience feelings like this, it's a fantastic poem, written with great feeling

I love your work this poem has very good feeling 5/5 Caleb Hammett =)

Dude love this poem keep it up (^_^)