by katie Apr 30, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
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My mummy used to be beautiful, |
by Baby Rainbow
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Aww thats so powerful. wow, great job deep topic xxxx |
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Wow. Thats intense, pure emotion showing through. Excellent expression. Well laid out and has a steady rythym. Good work. |
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Woah. this was really good. If this is true I'm so sorry. You have a lot of talent as a poet tho. I loved the emotions you poured into this. It's like you opened up your soul and let the words just flow. Way to go. 5/5 |