I try

by CEE CEE   May 3, 2008


I try not to call u
i try not to care
I just try to believe that these feelings aren't there
I try not to miss u
i try not to cry
I even try not to remember what it felt like to have u in my life

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sole

    I like this piece. Simple and to the point. Your message is clearly conveyed, and the reader can understand easily what you're going through.
    I thought the structure was good 2 short lines and a longer line, and the rhyming flowed well with no forced words.
    Nice piece :)

    Sole x

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I know exaclty where this came from!! well done x

  • 17 years ago

    by thesuffocationinsafety

    I can really relate to this; great job, keep it up 5/5

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