Writing

So simple, so creative, and wow. Its nice to see a poet's own idea of writing itself and this was nice. The audience can see and feel whats going on, in the easiest of ways.I really like this excellent job.

To write/type a poem about writing would be hard enough, but to do so in such a way as you have is difficult. You created a short poem that is also detailed, all on a topic that can barely be described. Great Job there

The poem did confuse me though. I didn't grasp some of your metaphors as fully as you have. Granted I am a reader not the writter.

Anway thanks for the read.

Good, but I wish it could have been longer.

Nice image and the word flow is good but if they were to be Haikus I see you have my problem too.

I remember that I've already read this piece once and I loved it, I just haven't had time to leave comment then.
First off, I admire the fact that you managed to say so much within just three stanzas. This poem is vivid and deep, truly memorable. I like every stanza, they are powerful and seemingly simple yet really powerful. I have only one suggestion: maybe you can add some more punctuation signs to create more powerful flow? I liked the way it flows and its captivating rhythm but some more punctuation would highlight the message even better.
Overall, this is enjoyable read. Greatly done.