Enjoyed reading this one.
The reader can feel the emotions of love, sadness & longing for someone who is gone. I regret you the experience but you have turned it into something beautiful.
And YES I was singing as I read it :)
I completely understood this poem! I love phantom of the opera and this poem did angel of music justice the way you describe the woman in this poem as an angel as if she were in a dream and then you awake with tears because you realize that dream was not your reality. I think it makes sense as a song and as a poem and really loved your choice of words to fescribe every second and I fell lik it realy told a story and it did remind me of phantom of the opera and I think it told a beautiful story so you get a 5/5 from me.