Nitin
This poem is one of my Favorites that you have penned so far. The imagery and word choices are great. I was so drawn to your words.

With my wings of faith
This heart will learn to fly
Keep your windows open
Let this love come inside
With your hands in mine
This life will pass me by
Eternity to sleep in peace
Yet no time for goodbyes

Unreachable love can find us in our dreams and our minds. Feeling one from thousands of miles away. Bringing feelings of comfort to a broken heart. These lines are so beautiful.

Fly me to the moon
Sing for me your lullaby
Mirror would lie your beauty
Simply look in my eye
With my will to dream
These nightmares would cry
Hear voices my love
Its time for me to die

We see beauty in those we love that sometimes they are blind to. If only they could see themselves from the eyes of those who love them. Just the feelings of hearing your love singing as you fall to a peacefull end.

Great job!
Love Cindy

Wow wat a idea.. who wud not love to fly to a dream... d moon..

Excellent write..

Keep it up

Best wishes,

Karan

Touching in ways I can not express, smoothly expressed easy to read.

Wow, this is extremely deep and moving with so much sincerity and love.
Love the way layout of the poem, 2 stanzas of 8 lines, made it flow beautifully.
Effectively written, it so deeply made me feel the emotion in every word.
This is truly breath taking, 5/5

This heart will learn to fly
Keep your windows open
Let this love come inside

Very nice words Nitin!
I loved the feel of this poem, you did well on this one!

Hugs,

Ingrid

Aw that was beautiful :)

Mirror would lie your beauty
Simply look in my eye

Beautiful lines... Liked the way you expressed it.
In fact all the lines are so well written... wonderful to read... a beautiful poem.

Fair enough i can understand the feeligns , but if i want to give honest opingion ,
i dont have anythign against free poetry , but i prefer more structure , your paragraph are big make reader afraid to read not good to the eye

and second i prefer amore good rhyme !!

i hope i am not soo hard in my coment!!

Nice

Amazing

Excellent

You are a excellent writter.

That's so cute romantic and tragic

Wo0o0o0w nice poem i do really like it =))))

Good imagery and word choice in this piece. It flows beatifully all the way to the sad ending.....

Sweetly romantic...great emotions that flow well beginning to end!

"Fly me to the moon
Sing for me your lullaby
Mirror would lie your beauty
Simply look in my eye"

^ These lines speak of pure love....the beauty of the beloved in the eye of the beholder...the ability to see the inner beauty of that soul shing from within....

Nicely done! Take care, Debbie.

Compliment..you did a good work! i love it!

Great job!!

Wow! this was deep. so powerful. very very pure. and heartfelt. it touched me. i loved it. you can really make your words come to life, beautiful job. 5/5.

-Ashlei.

From the start this poem flowed with such
tender love with a shocking end. I really
liked the first verse...beautifully done.