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by jane   May 5, 2008


Do you love me
Its a very simple question
Answer me
Now
Answer me
If you say yes
I can run to you
Finally
If you say no
I can die
Silently

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  • 17 years ago

    by jane

    He didnt =,(

  • 17 years ago

    by Sara

    Dang! Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by your love is mine

    Aww this poem is sooooo good.=)

  • 17 years ago

    by Moose

    I get what you're saying. Its simple enough.

    "I can't live without your love"

    but try to make it a little longer. Its so short and sweet, its giving me a cavity XD

    A poem is suppose to make you question a little bit what the author truly intended. Its a great way for a poem to reach depth, where it can have a simple meaning, although it almost seems like there SHOULD be a deeper meaning.

    Trying making it longer and a little bit of a rhythm and it should turn out fine. At the moment its prob a 3/5, but i'll wait til you work on it before I make further judgement =p

  • 17 years ago

    by Pink Romance

    Lol. no dont kill your self over men. just getting your heart broken is enough pain.

    5/5

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