Omg this is an absolutely amazing piece! 5/5 there was absolutely great description and it flowed well together!!

Keep Writing, hun
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~

I really really REALLY like this one i picture a murderer going crazy its perfect
the description everything i cant choose a favorite part its all so good i love how
you gave it a different twist compared to other poems it kinda gave me chills i could actually picture it great job another 5/5!!!

Seriously your like an awesome writer! keep on writing!

Amazing. that seriously is some vivid creepy work=]. Brilliant in the best sence. U are deffinently a great writer who can pull anyone into ur world. great job. cant wait to read more.

victoria

Thanks for turning me on to this peice. Your description is amazing and put me into that dark place. Not very many people have the empathy to put themselves in the place or understand the reasoning behind the mind of a killer. Truly a nice peice of horror poetry. Thank you. Ill check out more of your stuff.

Thanks for turning me on to this peice. Your description is amazing and put me into that dark place. Not very many people have the empathy to put themselves in the place or understand the reasoning behind the mind of a killer. Truly a nice peice of horror poetry. Thank you. Ill check out more of your stuff.

I, too, have known people with a soul of savage cruelty. I like how this one ended up behind bars. I wish the same outcome for every cruel soul.