by Lemonbread May 7, 2008
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
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Shes beautiful when covered in bruises |
by Ian Robert
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I liked this one, but I don't know, rhyming is okay but it just doesnt seem to flow perfect... try humming it when you write i know it brings allot more flow into my work.. check some out see if it helps |
by NinjaGirl
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A brilliant but sad piece 5/5 the flow was marvelous as was the rhyme!!! |