Your Eyes

by Lemonbread   Jun 20, 2008


I see a lonely boy looking for hope
And a longing love for someone
I see the tears he had to cry
As he cried long nights for his special one

I see the truth and lies
The anger but also a smile
In hope he had found her
Even if he waited for a while

I see this and much much more
On the outside though you look fine
But I can see within your eyes
What do you see in mine?

TM - LiquidSugar

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ayumi

    Squeeeeeeee~ I like this one a lot! It's so.. genuine. Sweet. AWESOME. :D The words just flow nicely and the meaning is crystal clear. Love it!

  • 17 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love this, very well-written!! Every line was flawless and so well put!

    I did like how in the end you put: "What do you see in mine?"

    I enjoyed every line, so keep it up!

    By the way, good luck with the contest! :)

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