Sunshine

by Ares   May 7, 2008


Sunshine brought tears to my eyes,
won't the first time I'm stuck in a maze,
of light fire making my eyes burn,
heart filled with desire, why can't I learn?

that life is too good to be fooling around,
make this the feeling or make this a sound,
something to look for once we are gone.

sunshine made people live life,
extensions of fear and pretentious distress,
but sunshine opens up my mind,
to make up for my flaws.

and life is too good to be fooling around,
make this the feeling or make this a sound,
something to look for once we are gone.

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i know this poem doesn't follow the "usual" rhymes
and build ups, but it's just a feeling i got from walking
in the sun.

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  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    Perfection

  • 16 years ago

    by miracle

    I like it alot hun keep up the great work...5/5